The Extra-Solar Union of Systems Archive

Kinda like an answer plz....

I have a question before I retry, could I re-edit my previous entries or do I have to start from scratch?

gimmie a few days then, I'll re-try the original 3 on monday when I'm not drowning in work

Yeah the first one was REALLY rushed, the last 2 were incomplete, especially the second one where the results would normally be in the hands of the other nation.

I'd like to quantify this if I may, I was treating the tests as if they were posts, requireing another person to interact.

If I was told or it was implied that I should treat them more as samples of writing then as posts I'd expand on them. I'd be more then willing to take another test.

Doesn't matter 1 way or another to me. I've got nothing but time.

Heh Telros, it's not like I've got anything better to do. If accepted I might try to apply as a tester myself.

(Sry for the delay) Test 3: This was not a good day for Lord-Mayor Marcus. Appointed by Minister Saito herself, Marcus Johnson was Lord Mayor of Mechanicsburg, the capital of the Union, for the last 12 years. And now it seems that time may come to an end. "The protest is 2 kilometers away. Movi...

Test 2: (Note: I'm including the Jägerkin's accents in this, mostly because I always do, and the source I took them from always do.) This is bad. Very bad. Fritz Jägerkin stared at his moniter. Ships from dozens of worlds leaping into Blackgrue space, a war of misunderstanding... The Liberalis...

Test 1: This wasn't supposed to happen... We were only trying to help... Maxwell Thompson, in his air-tight bronze suit surveyed the ruins of Mechanicsburg. The massive towering spires, the enormous block-like structures, and even outcroppings under the great dome once teemed with life... No more......