Application Attempt #1 :Transmission:

[Khalastas]

All hail the infinite wisdom and power of the Emperor and the High Lords of Terra.

The Western-rim Imperial Commonwealth of Joura under the Emperor's reign wishes to become associated in the Union of Systems.

...Awaiting Data Scans...

Transmission Sent.

-Khalastas, High Administrator of Joura

[Otagia]

Welcome to the Extra-Solar Union of Systems! To enter, you'll have to pass a series of three tests. Each will attempt to gauge a seperate aspect of your roleplaying ability. You will need to get an average score of 85% on these tests to be admitted. These tests need not be used as canon material for your nation, although they may be if you wish. If you don't pass, you can try again as soon as you want.

Your first test:
An assassin attempts to kill the High Administrator. RP the success or failure of this attempt, and the measures (and their success or failure) taken to track down and capture/kill the group behind the attack.

[Khalastas]

Covert Defence Team Alpha 1 hurried towards the approaching Chaos drop ship, the grassy wetlands surrounding the Sacred city of Leves abundant in all manner of wildlife. The powerful engines of the dark craft that had been sent by the evil Lord Maledictorius seared the green grass as the ship landed heavily. A door opened with a loud creaking and Alpha 1 Team Leader Harkorius halted his assortment of assassins and demolition experts in a grove of tall Oak trees, the thick canopy providing shade as cover for the sweating team. Several heavily armoured warriors exited the drop ship platform which had been deployed during the landing , followed by the assassin given the task of removing High Administer Justicium of the city Leves. The assassin lit up his stolen Exitus rifle and began at a run towards the city, taking shelter occasionally in the deep undergrowth. Unaware of the eyes of Team Alpha , the assassin entered the city and took cover deep in one of the Sub-city tunnels that run deep under the city. Harkorius wondered at his motives in the gas-filled chambers. Interrupting his thought, Harkorius heard the soft clicking of a bolter being reloaded with another round of ammunition.

None of my team are armed with bolters, the team leader thought to himself. Carefully turning around, he noticed what his team had seen before him. They were ambushed by the Chaos Space Marines who had exited the drop ship earlier. Harkorius knew that the remaining troops in the drop ship would have been alerted by one of the marines and decided it best to make sure they didn’t get the chance to alert the assassin. Harkorius pulled a time bomb from his belt and clicked it into action, the two minute timer set and the dangerous chemical explosive attached to a tree behind him.

“Drop your weapons!â€

[Otagia]

Test #2
The Imperium of Man has fallen. Terra has been overrun by the forces of Chaos, and the Emperor has been slain. Now, a vast Chaos armada is approaching Joura, and is hellbent on enslaving the world. Your fleet is outmatched, and has no hope of survival. RP the engagement, up to the inevitable destruction of your nation.

[Khalastas]

Chaos Lord Kane’s heavy adamantine boots clanked heavily on the metal grated causeway over the control bridge, the main cockpit porthole directly in front of the hulking beast. Pausing briefly and chuckling, he lifted his hand and issued a shout. His minions frantically ran around trying to complete their master’s request to prepare the Planet Killer. Flux energy fields burst into life as a range of generators were switched on and the brilliant turbines jumped into action. The Imperial Fleet of a meagre ten hovered before Kane’s armada - fresh from Terra. Kane felt a sweet triumphant taste in his mouth and a shiver ran through his muscular body, for on his trophy rack was the deformed head of the Emperor himself, slain by Kane and his Favoured Disciple, Kamgorath. Kamgorath was a Warp Beast whom Kane had enslaved to fight alongside him, and had helped defeat many a mighty War General. The fight with Terra had left Kane’s mighty fleet crushed and crippled but still with enough strength to destroy the remainders of the Imperial Worlds.

The Jouran ships unleashed a devastating blockade of Ion blasts which destroyed near half of the remaining ships. The hulks were sent flying as they were blasted with the heavy weaponry and chunks of fuselage crashed into the ships nearby those that were annihilated. “Return fire, you fools. They must all be destroyed!â€

[Otagia]

Test #3: A scientist in your nation has discovered a method to transform your citizens into, horror of horror, furries. Your government, needless to say, doesn't particularily relish the thought of ruling over a bunch of catgirls, but the treatment has become incredibly popular. RP your government's attempts to regulate the treatment, and negotiations with the doctor to cease performing these operations. No shooting allowed.

[Central Facehuggeria]

Test #3:

Fill in your own? Better fix that.

[Otagia]

Did so. I think you'll like this one, CF.

[Khalastas]

High Administrator Khalastas Justicium sat upon his embroidered throne, the crystalline rods on the arm rests glittering in the reflection. One of his servants entered the room nervously, covering her face in a feeble and obvious attempt to hide something. “Stand up straight and let me see you,â€

[Flaming Souls]

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Test #1

Good, but it felt a little rushed and anti-climactic. Next time you are presented with a situation like this, attempt to have the final confrontation between the protagonist and antagonist be a little more prolonged.

Score: 75%

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Test #2

I liked this one a lot, especially with the tie in to Test 1. A little short, but length is not a grading factor.

Score: 90%

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Test #3

Intriguing, to say the least. Minor spelling and grammatical errors but nothing near enough to detract from the overall feel and flow of the RP. Nice length.

Score: 90%

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Overall Score: 85%
Status: Passed

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