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Jordaxia
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Post by Jordaxia »

Alrighty.

Scenario 1: 91%. The length was perfectly acceptable, and the RP was well-written. No real criticisms at all. Unusual end, as well.
Scenario 2: 93%. Definitely well written and with the best "flow" of them all.
Scenario 3: 86%. I had rather hoped the Orthranar would be rather more desperate about their situation - the lack of true "losing" in this situation, your civ dying, was my fault, as reading the question, I never stated anything like it. However, I feel you didn't do as much with this scenario as you could, though it is satisfactory nonetheless.

Average: 90% - pass.
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Central Facehuggeria
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Post by Central Facehuggeria »

All these RPers who're better then me are coming out of the woodwork! Egads! :P

Oh, and account activated.
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