Abridged History of Siesatia 2.0 (I really need an opinion)

[Siesatia]

History of Siesatia (Abridged)
The original Siesatians were human; they were not proficiently advanced in anything, except the science of genetics. The president then decided to use that technology to recreate an intelligent creature that had died out long ago, and use them as slave labor. They acquired the necessary DNA from fossils and succeeded in reestablishing an extinct creature. However, they realized that the Utah raptor was too fierce and unintelligent to use as slave labor, and destroyed them.

However, a rouge group of scientists decided to try again, this time, tweaking the genes that controlled brain growth. This time they created creatures smarter than they were which presented an even greater problem. The lab scientists realized that they responded to speech, and could learn extremely advanced tasks very quickly, but they were too smart, and escaped to the nearby jungle. All 1000 of them made it.

Over the next 100 years they built a society, one that rivaled the Siesatians in technological prowess and intelligence, until war broke out, the Human Siesatians were destroyed, and the entire population of raptors took over the land, taking the name of their creators. However, nations saw the great threat of these new creatures, and drove them from the earth, and to the moon, where we have stayed.

The First War
The First war, was not really a war, but a slaughter, humans were killed to a point where they could no longer bring themselves to fight. Those who gave up were captured, and later, incorporated into the society. However, 10 years after the war ended, the populous of earth began to cower at the thought of such a powerful nation, however small, existing on earth, and drove them off, it was believed by the countries of earth, that they had died out. The raptors have yet to forgive themselves for this slaughter, even many, many years afterwards. Making their home on the dark side of the moon, they built up a powerful civilization, and moved into the light once again. Earth had advanced much, and more tolerant nations had come into power. Siesatian Fighters soon became common sight in space, as did carriers. The Paradox at the time was the only carrier design.

This brought Siesatia to open diplomatic relations to the universe, and opened her up to the violation of rights many countries were committing, including a small, theocracy named Cherry Ridge.

The First Cherry Ridge Conflict
The Following are the events that took place aboard the SMSC Freestar during the Cherry Ridge Conflict and affirmed the alliance and commradery between Siesatia and Democratic Colonies.

Siesatia: Cherry Ridge was sufficiently less advanced than Siesatia, and ran off of ‘It is better to be feared than loved’ they killed all those who were not of their religion, and killed all those who didn’t believe in what they believed. So, Siesatia, along with their allies Democratic Colonies, succeeded in the takeover of Cherry Ridge, unfortunately, the former president, did not claim the land, but put Cardinal DeVito back into power, and was later stabbed in the back by the dictator.

The meeting of Siesatia and Democratic Colonies

INSERT 4 PAGE LONG RP DATA ON DC AND SIESATIA MEETING, THIS WAS DELEATED, AND IS ONLY AVAILIABLE AT WIKI

ISEC and UFP
Siesatia later joined ISEC, where she later became the Defense Chairman, and contributed greatly to it. Siesatia also joined the UFP at this time.

Meeting the Burmecians
A Siesatian scout craft was out exploring the area, its name just so happened to be the ‘Gaia’. They made it just in time to see the Burmans decelerate from FTL travel, and instantly sent out communiqués. Siesatia was in the process of looking for a new planet for their ever expanding population to relocate too, and the sparsely populated Gaia, was perfect. The first Colony ships set down less than a year later, and the King signed over the entire empire, the United States of Siesatia began educating the local population, and building up cities. All the cities that had existed pre Mist War, were rebuilt.

Leaving the UFP, and a New Age
This was a time of great political change, and President Nicholas Crescent came to power when Former President Drake Rille retired. He saw what the former president refused to see, the corruption of the UFP, as TFU was using it as his personel army, and Left in disgust. Siesatia was accepted into ESUS at about this time.

Siesatia then moved towards more advanced technologies, and the second great technological boom occured. At this time, temporal technology made it's appearence in Siesatia's arsenal. It was also at this time that the United States of Siesatia became the Unified Worlds of Siesatia.

The Third Cherry Ridge Conflict
It was also not long until Cherry Ridge resumed its activities. This prompted the gevernment to send an armada of vessels. The Siesatian ships were joined by forces sent from Balrogga and DemonLordEnigma. Also, ties to Democratic Colonies were renewed during this coalition. This coalition was then opposed by fleets from New Exodus and Crazed Marines, who wished to prevent the invasion of a planet-bound country by inter-stellar powers. In the ensuing conflict, fortunately, no lives were lost on either side, and no damage was done, thanks in part to the efforts of New Exodus to forge a peace treaty. Mind you, only one shot was fired, which was done by Crazed Marines as a warning.

Facing the threat of the Siesatian coalition, Cherry Ridge signed a religious tolerence law and agreed to provisions that would guarantee the law's enforcement. Also as part of this treaty, Siesatia regained control of a portion of St. Berchmans Isle. However, the Allied Forces Crazed Marines and New Exodus keep a watchful eye over these happenings to make sure Cherry Ridge doesn't get the short end of the stick.

The Indra Prime - Temporal Council War
More to come soon, read all about it on the II forums.

Previous Presidents
Drake Rille - 2073 - 2103
The first president of Modern Siesatia. He led the Nation through some of the hardest times. A Raptor, and father of three. He currently resides in Alexandria City.

Nicholas Crescent - 2104 - Present
The Second President of Modern Siesatia, he is Burman, and unmarried at the moment. He leads by example, and sticks to his training as a Dragon Knight strictly.

[Wormia]

Ah, history. Nice post.

[Central Facehuggeria]

I'm not sure what a Burman is, but other than that, nice post.