I passed!? What the hell!?
Note to self, for my own improvement's sake:
1) Learn to write better endings.
2) Diplomatic solutions need improvement.
3) Character writing and names needs improvement. And lots of it.
4) Get around to finishing the new fleet and army designs.
5) Waiting until after midnight to write, and writing everything in one sitting, seems to work. Later proof-reading is a must, though.
Application
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Not too bad, new guy. Welcome to the family..thing.
Traileric Empire
Guide our souls to the Elysium Fields
Bear us home upon our shields
Lay coins across our brows and sound the bells
We're paying our fare on the river to Hell
And when our sons and mothers lay us upon the funeral pyre
Tell them we died Hellenic soldiers with our faces to the fire
Guide our souls to the Elysium Fields
Bear us home upon our shields
Lay coins across our brows and sound the bells
We're paying our fare on the river to Hell
And when our sons and mothers lay us upon the funeral pyre
Tell them we died Hellenic soldiers with our faces to the fire