Well Done Sir/Ma'am!
Scenario #1:96%
Scenario#2:98%
Scenario#3:99.5%
Overall:97.8%
PASS
Welcome to the R-ESUS!
Comments:
Overall, that was the most enjoyable test set that I have read in a long while. The plots were very well thought out, as were the characters. My only set back for this was the grammar, which is easily fixed, just put your posts through Word or some such and then paste them into the thread. Otherwise, I really look forward to what you have to bring to the community.
Solar Communes
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Metallinauts
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- Prefix: The
- Name: Metallinautsi Federation
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Arizona Nova
- GENTLEMEN, BEHOLD!
- Posts: 3703
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- Name: Arizona Nova
Re: Solar Communes
Account activated.
[center]Wit ye well, that when no good men remain to stand against those who choose evil, what will remain to restrain them from unleashing their dark designs?[/center]
~Anikar
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~Anikar
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Solar Communes
- ESUS Testicle Monster
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- Name: Solar Communes
Re: Solar Communes
Sory, my Engrish bad, I try will hard.
Now all your base are belong to us!
Achtung!
Heil Grammatik! o/ o/ o/
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Now without any LOL or silly joke, whenever I plan ahead, I end with a sucky post, and I usually trust the Firefox spell checker for the job. My best writings are those based on a dynamic, improvised "at the moment" plot line, rather than at a pre-planned script to be detailed later.
Now all your base are belong to us!
Achtung!
Heil Grammatik! o/ o/ o/
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Now without any LOL or silly joke, whenever I plan ahead, I end with a sucky post, and I usually trust the Firefox spell checker for the job. My best writings are those based on a dynamic, improvised "at the moment" plot line, rather than at a pre-planned script to be detailed later.
ESUS: And with strange Eons, even Death may Die
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Trailers
- Take Off Every Zig For Great Justice!
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- Prefix: The Glorious Hellenic Empire
- Name: Trailers
Re: Solar Communes
Skluzein venderwuhnt?
Traileric Empire
Guide our souls to the Elysium Fields
Bear us home upon our shields
Lay coins across our brows and sound the bells
We're paying our fare on the river to Hell
And when our sons and mothers lay us upon the funeral pyre
Tell them we died Hellenic soldiers with our faces to the fire
Guide our souls to the Elysium Fields
Bear us home upon our shields
Lay coins across our brows and sound the bells
We're paying our fare on the river to Hell
And when our sons and mothers lay us upon the funeral pyre
Tell them we died Hellenic soldiers with our faces to the fire